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Evolution of Aliv by Mamiru Evolution of Aliv by Mamiru
Jumping on the bandwagon~! Eeheh he sure has changed a lot over the years, or I guess my drawing style is what's changed.
That first one though.... :iconallmytearplz:
I hope you enjoy the special commentary too.

I'll scrap this later.
I don't know what's sadder that first Aliv or the fact I had to throw in the fem!Aliv meme because I have so few revamps OTL </strike>

LOLOL I wasn't expecting to get reviews on this? Since it was mainly for fun, I'm very confused as to why people wanted to review it but uhh yeah, I'll probably be turning that feature off from now on xD
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To be honest, the one that really caught my attention was the girl. XD well, I just thought the way you have drawn his female version was cute.

Okay, I'll tell you what, one by one...
The first one was colored pretty nice but the way it was drawn is a bit off for me. Your coloring defended your drawing skills but it doesn't it's perfect to be exact because you didn't balance the head with the body.

Second, was actually pretty good. It's a big success in developing your skills in line art. Although, the angle of the neck to the head was too stiff. Your coloring is somewhat how manga artists color in the old days and I am simply impress on this one.

Third, is close to perfection though the whole body became a bit stiff. Some parts are too long and too short. The coloring is much better on this one too. I love it.

Fourth, your shading became too smooth that it's like trying to be realistic in a way that it doesn't fit with the drawing style. But the way you have drawn the body in this one improved and it has a much better structure than before.

Fifth, I don't know what on earth happened but you lost everything on this one... This is super smooth that it hurts the eye. You didn't even finish shading it but since it's a WIP it can be excluded.

Sixth, no stiff bodies, no over exagge smoothing level, no unbalance shading. Just right! :D You got it all right now though I think it's better to color the lashes black so that the eyes can be seen clearly.

Anyways, all and all it's a wonderful improvement. ^u^
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yueru Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omgggg girll look at this evolution of amazing Aliv HAHA UGHH THE LAST TWO ARE SO BEAUTIFUL I JUST /GRABS YOU AND SHAKES YOU KEEP GOING OKAY I WILL TRY HARD TO CATCH UP AND AND YEAH HAHA <3333333333333

Also, that 3rd pose /chokes Aliv watare you doing LOLL
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Mamiru Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
AHSVGDKASH H-HE'S SUPPOSED TO BE PUTTING UP HIS HAIR. :iconsopsplz:

WHAT DO YOU MEAN CATCH UP?!?! If we were running on treadmills you'd be right beside me~! going like 50x faster than me
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SeigyokuAkiko Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student General Artist
It improved quite a lot! Love it! :3
December 2011 and September 2013 really caught my eye :)
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Mamiru Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Ahh thank you! I'll keep working hard to improve! o u o
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rtj3000 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I am gunna do a criteuqe .. ur not gunna like it.... but i will be honest.. but i will say i love the december2011 style and the september 2013 style
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Mamiru Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Hahahaha no no don't worry, honesty is great! I didn't mind at all, thank you!
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shycatgirl Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love seeing things like this! Good job! Keep working hard :D
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Mamiru Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
Thank you! I will! * u * /
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shycatgirl Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:3
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tshuki Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Lovely improvement! *o* <3
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